Score: 8

"This is great."

submission: Windows Doors

date: September 24, 2009

After following the thread in the Flash forum, I knew this would amount to something great.

Overall, there is little advice I can offer you. You are clearly a great coder and deserve more than just a Daily 3rd for this.

Score: 7

"Not bad."

submission: GadSnakePath

date: March 2, 2009

The programming you put into it was excellent, but there were a few simple things you could do to make it better. It wouldn't take much longer to improve the graphics, add sound, or even add an editor that allows you to place blocks or something to create a maze for the snake, or something similar.

Overall, it was good, but could have been better.

Score: 8

"Relevant to my interests."

submission: The n00b Collab

date: February 21, 2009

It would have been better if you made my alt a co-author.

Minus 12 points for lack of me being co-author.
Plus 20 for me being in it.

Score: 7

"Nice."

submission: After the Disaster

date: July 23, 2009

Although it is rather ill-fitting to the theme, it still sounds great. Up until about :36, it's a rather mundane piece. The first part should be a little shorter. Also, the instrumentals at the beginning didn't fit very well with the rest of the song.

Otherwise, it is an excellent piece.

Score: 2

"Not that great."

submission: Newgrounds Rap

date: July 20, 2009

First, you really don't need to resort to beatboxing for this sort of thing. It would not sound a lot better and professional if you used a drum loop, and maybe a simple music loop. Standalone beatboxing and voices doesn't make good listening.

Aside from that, the lyrics were alright. Though I don't really enjoy or condone rap, you did an alright job, assuming you have little experience. Otherwise, smarten up and make some REAL music.

Score: 6

"Eh, well."

submission: Smooth Dragon Moves

date: May 2, 2009

Much like MasterJace said, it isn't your source midi. I understand that you have permission, but you still should have varied it up a little more, instead of just changing the instruments.

Just keep in mind that you can do a lot more than this.